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 === First Feeder ===
 [[File:OGfeederOutside.png|thumb|190x190px|The first feeder made ! ]]
-The first feeder made is the most distinct of all, due to the fact it’s fully made of wood and while it has cameras it cannot be viewed. Many of the differences with the original feeder and the other models are due to the fact it was home-made and would be the prototype of the later stray cat shed models. It is located in the entrance of the offices of the Hello Street Cat project’s and serves as a reminder of the mission to feed all stray cats. (This is not it’s only purpose, it still serves as a way to feed cats).
+The first feeder made is the most distinct of all, due to the fact it’s fully made of wood. While it has cameras, it cannot be viewed. Many of the differences with the original feeder and the other models are due to the fact it was home-made, and would be the prototype for the later used stray cat shed models. It is located at the entrance of the Hello Street Cat office, and serves as a reminder of the mission to feed all stray cats. (This is not it’s only purpose, it still serves as a way to feed cats).